Ace of Spades Game Forums » Tag: kaede-chan is sexy - Recent Topics http://forumarchive.spadille.net/ Ace of Spades Game Forums » Tag: kaede-chan is sexy - Recent Topics en Sat, 09 May 2026 06:30:54 +0000 AnacondaML on "my 'novel'" http://forumarchive.spadille.net/topic.php?id=2409#post-29849 Mon, 20 Jun 2011 00:08:49 +0000 AnacondaML 29849@http://forumarchive.spadille.net/

hey everyone,
lately I've been putting some late nights into writing a story of sorts. Currently it's around 5,000 words. I decided that now I have the premise of the story, I might want some people reading the shit I've written so far and tell me what they think. Any takers? Please, don't hate, just constructive criticism. I'm quite proud of my work so far.